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Primitive Moments 15.5

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:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Repetitive work. You have many of the same type. The color balance could be improved. Try choosing a color scheme/pallete. I like the "anaglyph" thing on the right corner.

The overal image has an uncertain impact, and the shapes are blury and out of focus (it seems unintended). Also the square aspect ration has a negative impact of the work's overal feeling. You could try studing aspcets of composition (golden square etc).

Lastly, I like the stars on background but it could be better if they were more "in focus" rather that staying in the background as glimpses of light.